1. I am trying to learn about marijuana’s negative side effects
2. I am trying to learn about marijuana’s negative side effects because I want to find out whether or not it is dangerous
3. I am doing this in order to consolidate a plethora of existing research in a single paper about marijuana’s negative side effects without talking about legalization or regulation.
Who hasn’t heard about the Penn State scandal? I feel I little confused about how to feel about this. It is my first year at Penn State and a scandal of this magnitude had to erupt. How it will affect my future employment opportunities is still unclear. The scandal boils down to sexual misconduct by Sandusky, a Penn State coach. He supposedly sexually abused young boys from a youth charity. Although Sandusky is the main perpetrator in the scandal, he is hardly the center of attention. Most of the media is focusing on the legendary Penn State football coach, Joe Paterno.
Joe Paterno has been given a bad reputation in the media. Many people claim that Paterno is culpable. Others believe that he is innocent. Both sides have legitimate perspectives. Legally, Paterno did what was required by rules and regulations. Some believe that he should have gone beyond the rules and regulations to follow up. Either way, Joe Paterno was not the child molester, but the media sees his role in the scandal as more important than Sandusky’s.
One inconsistency is that until today, McQueary was going to be the coach on Saturday’s game. The irony in that is that McQueary saw the sexual abuse first hand. What brought it upon the trustees to fire Joe Paterno, a legend, and keep McQueary? I feel that this is a grave inconsistency that shows an inappropriate reaction. As of now, McQueary is not going to coach Saturday’s game due to death threats that he received.
One result of the administration’s failure to empathize with the students was the riot Wednesday night. As a result of the riot, a WTAJ van was flipped, light posts were pulled out, and vehicles were attempted to be lit on fire. Anybody could have seen this coming when the trustees fired a legendary coach. For the trustees to not consider the backlash from firing a Penn State tradition is beyond comprehension. Joe Paterno had one more game to coach, and was not legally guilty as a trial had not been conducted.
One of the results of recent events is Penn State’s image being harmed. This is the largest university-level scandal to have evolved in recent years. How it will affect the university’s standings, both academic and sports, is still unknown. Many media outlets speculate that it will certainly harm both. This is of great concern to students and faculty alike. Through personal experience, my friends on facebook are reconsidering going to this university just because of this scandal. Also, some athletes decided to not play here next year because of this scandal. There are many backlashes, and the administration is doing everything they can to handle this situation poorly. Their responses are merely preventative and their decisions are not supported with evidence or explanation. This scandal has yet to come to full fruition as the trials and statements have not yet been conducted. Also, with a new administration and a new coaching staff, Penn State may become a new university altogether. Who knows what the future holds?
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Marijuana is an herb that is used both medicinally and recreationally. It has been used by humans for thousands of years for such purposes. In the 20th century, many countries banned the drug. Recently, there has been an emergent movement to legalize it in the United States. Marijuana was banned in the United States with the Controlled Substances Act (CSA) of 1970. Under this act, marijuana is a schedule I drug (the most dangerous of the five schedules), along with heroine, ecstasy, magic mushrooms, and LSD. The surge started in 2010 with Proposition 19. This ballot referendum would have legalized possession and growth of marijuana in California. It didn’t pass, but it showed the growing movement to legalize pot. Recently, a revolutionary poll by Gallup showed that a plurality of Americans support the legalization of marijuana (Newport). Ironically, this consensus is not represented in Congress, with no congressmen coming out in support of marijuana. Even more biting, the President of the United States has admitted to smoking marijuana (Seelye). There is a stark contrast in the will of the American people and their representation in congress (Eckholm).
Martin Luther King Jr. said that “One has not only a legal but a moral responsibility to obey just laws. Conversely one has a moral responsibility to disobey unjust laws.” That is just what millions have done; they have disobeyed a marijuana laws that are unjust and unconstitutional. Marijuana has been used by humans for thousands of years. In the 20th century, many countries banned the drug. Recently, there has been an emergent movement to legalize it in the United States. Marijuana is an herb that is used both medicinally and recreationally. It was banned in the United States with the Controlled Substances Act (CSA) of 1970. Under this act, marijuana is a schedule I drug (the most dangerous of the five schedules), along with heroine, ecstasy, magic mushrooms, and LSD. The surge started in 2010 with Proposition 19. This ballot referendum would have legalized possession and growth of marijuana in California. It didn’t pass, but it showed the growing movement to legalize pot. Recently, a revolutionary poll by Gallup showed that a plurality of Americans support the legalization of marijuana (Newport). Ironically, this consensus is not represented in Congress, with no congressmen coming out in support of marijuana. Even more biting, the President of the United States has admitted to smoking marijuana (Seelye). There is a stark contrast in the will of the American people and their representation in congress (Eckholm).
My argument paper is supporting the legalization of marijuana on the federal level. To that extent, it would probably be posted on NORML’s website. NORML is a group whose goal is to end marijuana prohibition. It is the largest and most well-known group in support of the position. They have been in the news recently for having the most voted-upon petition at the White House’s petition site, We The People. The petition was in support of marijuana legalization.
The article I chose is called “Real World Ramifications of Cannabis Legalization and Decriminalization.” The article is about what would happen if marijuana were decriminalized and the insufficiencies of marijuana prohibition. The author first makes the statement that marijuana prohibition is an absolute failure. He claims that regulation gives the government control over marijuana. With prohibition, they are removing any regulation from marijuana, making it more dangerous. These dangers include gang violence, and an easy gateway to harder drugs. After that, the author uses several examples of marijuana being legal in other countries. For example, in India, one UN statement claimed that the legalization of marijuana deterred crime. Lastly, the author makes the point that the legalization of marijuana will not increase its use.
The author is clearly in support of the legalization of marijuana. He takes this stance very carefully, suggesting more practical proposals than full-on legalization. This is a very clever way to support a radical position. The article is organized into sections by issue. This is very convenient and easy to read. On top of that, the main points are highlighted in bold. This makes the piece very good for both reading and skimming. I agree with the writer on some points and not on others. The evidence that he used to make his points is sometimes very shady and warrants investigation. Otherwise, the author does use a lot of ethos in his article, giving him a lot of authority on the subject. I like what the writer did in his piece. He uses some very interesting references, organized his article in a very convenient matter, and makes an intriguing point. One thing I would have liked to see the author do differently is remove a little of the bias. Sometimes he hides it well, but other times when he uses a quote from a discussion as ethos to prove that an entire movement was successful, it makes me question his legitimacy. This is a very minor factor in the article, and it is otherwise well written.
This piece has many techniques I can incorporate into my own writing. For one, it does a great job at organization. It separates the questions that it answers into sections. On top of that, it separates its references into sections as well, making the read very simple. The main points are highlighted, which made it even easier to read. Lastly, the author uses many studies, facts, and quotes, some of which I can incorporate into my paper. The article was very well written, and gave me many ideas for my paper.
http://norml.org/marijuana/personal/item/real-world-ramifications-of-cannabis-legalization-and-decriminalization-2?category_id=729
The first article is about abortion statistics. It shows a decreasing rate of abortions, and gives many statistics about how many women seek abortions. The article says that women normally give three reasons for choosing an abortion: "about three quarters say that having a baby would interfere with their work, school, or other responsibilities; about two thirds say they cannot afford a child; about one-half say they do not want to be a single parent or are having problems with their husband or partner."
Abortion is a hot-topic issue in America and I support it. The government should not be able to control a woman's body, keeping it illegal or unattainable would increase "back alley" abortions, and it will decrease children growing up in poor and neglected environments. In addition, some studies suggest that legal abortion leads to decreased crime rate.
The second article is about the perception of marijuana in American culture. Marijuana is a highly illegal, claimed dangerous drug that gives users a high. It was made illegal in 1970. Since that time, a good percentage of Americans supported its legalization. There are studies that claim that marijuana is carcinogenic, addicting, and dangerous. For each of these studies, there is a study claiming that marijuana is safe and non-addicting. In conclusion, it is very difficult to argue marijuana on the basis of scientific studies, but whether or not the government has the right to regulate marijuana is an issue of civil liberties.
I am in favor of legalization. Marijuana isn't more harmful than alcohol or tobacco, legalization would lead to less drug related crimes, it possesses many medical benefits, and it would provide a source of additional tax revenue. The U.S. would greatly benefit from legalizing marijuana.
The third article is about how the Supreme Court declined to reconsider a decision made 13 years ago permitting the juvenile death penalty. This shows how adamant the Supreme Court is about the decision that was made to keep the juvenile death penalty illegal. Juvenile death penalty is capital punishment on those who are under 18 years of age.
I am against the juvenile death penalty. A child who is not old enough to go to war, drink alcohol, smoke cigarettes, and even drive cannot make a decision that deems capital punishment. Capital punishment does not ward off other crimes and is ultimately ineffective. A child is not intellectually mature enough to take full responsibility for his actions. This is a legal precedent that lead to juvenile detention facilities. Allowing the juvenile death penalty is the hypocrisy of law and is illegal.
iPhone 4GS
The iPhone 4GS is Apple’s newest smartphone. It was announced on October 4th and just recently started being sold. New features include Siri, increased performance, a better camera, 1080p HD video, iOS 5, iCloud, a retina display, and improved FaceTime. All of these features lead to the explosive sales of Apple’s new phone. It went so far as to save Apple’s stock from dipping below $390 per share. The phone exhibits the characteristic physical perfection of previous apple products: a sleek design that also features utility. The front of the phone shows only a single button: a home button. On the top, there is a sleep button. On the sides there are volume and lock buttons. This is a mystic combination of buttons that creates the greatest utility. The phone fits perfectly in the palm of your hand. Additionally, the screen is within reach of your thumb at all times, but also allows for two handed use if it is preferred. The back of the phone features a camera and the apple logo. All of these features combined create the iPhone 4GS. Apple is expected to come out with sleek products that have minimalistic features. The iPhone 4GS does not disappoint.
Droid Bionic
The Motorola Droid Bionic is iPhone’s latest competitor. It touts improved performance, a large screen, and some unique software. The Bionic, like the 4GS, takes its design from its predecessors. It has very clean cut edges and chrome accents. This makes the device look far more masculine than the iPhone, which appeals to a much smaller group of people. On the top, there is a power button and a headset jack. On the front of the phone Is a camera. On the side there are two ports. These ports make it a challenge to properly hold the phone when plugged in. On the other side of the phone are two volume buttons. On the back is a camera. There is nothing on the bottom of the phone. One thing the droid trumps the iPhone on is it’s absolutely enormous screen. The screen measures 4.3 inches from corner to corner. The Droid line does not appeal to as wide of an audience as the iPhone, but it does offer a unique look. Some people appreciate the look of the Droid more, albeit a primarily male tech-junkie audience.
I am evaluating laptops for college students. This merits evaluation because many college students must buy laptops for college and are unaware of what is truly necessary for a basic laptop. College students use laptops for a plethora of reasons: note taking, organizing, emailing, browsing the web, and various major-specific things. Many students pay too much for laptops and will never fully utilize the computing power of their laptops. Others pay too little and must deal with sluggish performance until they buy a new laptop. Also, computer hardware specifications and prices are constantly changing, so new evaluations are necessary every few months to a year. According to Moore’s law, the number of transistors that can be placed on an integrated circuit doubles every two years. In lay man’s terms, computing power doubles every two years. This creates the need to reevaluate laptops very often. Lastly, essential programs such as Microsoft Office, and Windows Operating System are coming out with new version very often. These programs have different requirements from their previous versions and quickly become essential to own. Therefore, a college laptop merits evaluation.
Laptops for college students would fall under the laptop selection category. I would compare laptops against other laptops to pick a superior laptop. For example, I would compare a Dell to a Gateway using various criteria such as price, power, and appeal.
Considering the many parts to a laptop and many different uses, there would be many criteria. First you must choose an operating system. This will be a standoff between Mac and PC. Although there are many other operating systems, they are only useful to those who already know enough about laptops to not need to read my evaluation. Second, you must choose the proper amount of RAM. RAM is Random-access memory and represents the amount of information your system can retain at once without reduced speeds. Third, you must choose the proper processor. A processor controls the amount of information that can be dealt with at one time. Fourth, you must choose a suitable hard drive. All of your system’s information is stored on a hard drive. Fifth, you must decide on a video card. Video cards process everything you see on the monitor. Sixth, you must decide on a brand. I will be evaluating the most popular brands: Apple, Acer, ASUS, Dell, HP, Lenovo, Samsung, Sony, Toshiba, and Sager. Seventh, you must consider the appeal of the laptop. Eighth, the price must be considered. Lastly, you must choose a proper monitor size. All of these criteria are essential for choosing a proper laptop, making choosing a laptop above the pay grade of the average college student. This is my inspiration for writing this evaluation. One of the problems I could run into is the social aspect of laptops and certain preference. Many people have a preference to Apple laptops because of the social influence. Apple computers are far more popular than windows, but far less efficient. That being said, even some knowledged people prefer Apple laptops to their Windows alternative.
The design of my blog is easy to read and appropriate for a college classroom about Rhetoric and Writing. The blog uses a serif font for easy reading of longer paragraphs. The font size is optimized for the internet. I also use black font to create a natural contrast from the light background and increase readability. I used a serif font because they are easier to read in long paragraphs. Sans serif fonts are more eye-catching but are much more difficult to read in length. The information is assorted into paragraphs by topic for easy reading. The entries also have headings that show what each reading is about. The colors are neutral and have a contrast that is strong enough to read easily but flat enough to reduce the strain on the eyes when looking at items of high contrast. Lastly the blog title and layout expresses who I am well. It is a very plain blog with a few birds in the top right and a sarcastic title. This represents my sarcastic attitude and my goal of becoming a more concise writer. That is not to say that my bog is perfect. Being a graphic designer, I see many flaws in my blog. I don’t like the length of my blog title. Also, it includes my name which is clearly visible on other parts of my blog, creating unnecessary repetition. Considering its flaws, it still does accomplish its purpose. It is very well aimed at its audience. The purpose of the blog is clear.
[And now I redesign my blog]
My rough blog is now my final blog. First thing that I did was fix my time. It was about three hours off from the regular time. Then I had to change my blog title to something equally sarcastic but more concise. I chose ‘Does my blog title go here?’ I decided to drop the name on the end and reword it to be a little more concise. Then I removed my ‘Followers’ from the blog. I wasn’t using this feature and it was simply taking up space. After that I wrote a very short about me and put it on my blog as to not seem as anonymous. Then I fixed all of the blog titles: some of them didn’t even have titles.
1. I was walking down the hall of Holmes Hall at 2 AM on a Sunday looking for activity. I heard distinct giggling coming from one of the dorms, so, knowing the kids in the room, I walked right in. Once I stepped in, I saw a group of people who got wide eyed. I noticed a discrete fog in the room. I knew what was going on immediately; they were smoking Marijuana. I quickly stepped in and shut the door behind me. All around the common room of the four-person suite were snacks, drinks, and lighters. The room smelled like Febreeze and chips. There were four faces of students I had already known, and another four who I had never seen before. They all seemed different from each other; two were wearing sports jerseys, one was wearing a Bob Marley shirt, and the rest were wearing casual clothes. One guy put his iPod in a small pair of speakers and put on some music. I immediately recognized the song: it was No Quarter by Led Zeppelin. Everyone in the room seemed to be in deep thought leaning against something since not a sound was made. I broke the silence. I just had to ask; “why does it not smell in here?” I thought the smell from Marijuana was poignant and distinguished. A few of them smiled at my naiveté. “We didn’t smoke in here: that’s retarded. We vaporized it,” said the unfamiliar face with a Bob Marley shirt on slowly with a grin on his face. He then explained that the smell is minimized when you vaporize it. It was then that it occurred to me that Marijuana could be smoked without leaving a smell. I left the room before the song was over: I loved No Quarter by Led Zeppelin, but I no longer wanted to be involved in unlawful activities, considering the risks. I went back to my dorm with a slightly new perspective on Marijuana smokers.
2. Craig Aman, an 18 year old freshman at Penn State, says on the subject of Marijuana, “It’s just bad for you. It kills brain cells and I don’t know why anybody would use it. You might as well just kill yourself now if you want to die so badly.” He also said in a later part of the interview, “I used to know a very smart guy who smoked Marijuana. Marijuana got him addicted on harder drugs and now he’s working at Shoprite and living with his parents just so he can feed his addiction.”
A 20 year old junior at Penn State who asked to remain anonymous said “It’s not bad for you. There are plenty of people who can function fine. Just look at Michael Phelps. It clearly wasn’t bad for him; it was the media that ruined him, not the drug.”
3. “THC acts upon specific sites in the brain, called cannabinoid receptors, kicking off a series of cellular reactions that ultimately lead to the "high" that users experience when they smoke marijuana. Some brain areas have many cannabinoid receptors; others have few or none. The highest density of cannabinoid receptors are found in parts of the brain that influence pleasure, memory, thinking, concentrating, sensory and time perception, and coordinated movement.”
“Long-term marijuana abuse can lead to addiction; that is, compulsive drug seeking and abuse despite the known harmful effects upon functioning in the context of family, school, work, and recreational activities. Estimates from research suggest that about 9 percent of users become addicted to marijuana; this number increases among those who start young (to about 17 percent) and among daily users (25-50 percent).”
“Numerous studies have shown marijuana smoke to contain carcinogens and to be an irritant to the lungs. In fact, marijuana smoke contains 50-70 percent more carcinogenic hydrocarbons than tobacco smoke. Marijuana users usually inhale more deeply and hold their breath longer than tobacco smokers do, which further increase the lungs' exposure to carcinogenic smoke.”
http://www.nida.nih.gov/infofacts/marijuana.html
“Marijuana is far less dangerous than alcohol or tobacco. Around 50,000 people die each year from alcohol poisoning. Similarly, more than 400,000 deaths each year are attributed to tobacco smoking. By comparison, marijuana is nontoxic and cannot cause death by overdose. According to the prestigious European medical journal, The Lancet, ‘The smoking of cannabis, even long-term, is not harmful to health. ... It would be reasonable to judge cannabis as less of a threat ... than alcohol or tobacco.’”
http://norml.org/index.cfm?Group_ID=7305
4. My research had lead me to change my direction and focus a little bit. One thing I plan to do differently is to focus the paper on students, rather than the surrounding community. This will help improve my focus and allow me to elaborate on the issue a lot more. I could still get commentary from adults if I see it as necessary, but I will no longer focus it on that. Secondly, through my talking with people for and against Marijuana, I have decided that I may need a third perspective. I will try to get a balanced perspective. I have found several students who are apathetic towards Marijuana, but I have yet to find a student that is fully knowledgeable on the subject yet still neutral.
#1 Party School is titled after a 2009 ranking by Princeton Review naming Penn State the number one party school in America. It discusses the problem of drinking at State College. The reason that the problem is being investigated is because it causes local disturbances, causes damage, and takes lives. The intended audience is primarily those in State College who do not have a holistic view of the drinking situation. This includes students, faculty, residents, and entrepreneurs. The report clearly shows how drinking affects different groups. For example, it affects residents. One resident complained of burning furniture in neighbor’s yards, condoms and tampons in his lawn, and severe noise complaints. He even installed motion detectors to prevent future problems. Alternately, local businesses also have to adjust. McLanahans once had to order extra marshmallows because they became a fad. The report makes a stunning conclusion. It concludes that the drinking problem is so deeply rooted in Penn State culture that it is impossible to remove. Graham Spanier, the president of Penn State, mentioned that he is not hopeful for the future of drinking at Penn State, and that all they can do is try. Graham Spanier actually got booed the first time he made a public announcement scorning the drinking at Penn State. His powers are limited, despite his position. The report concludes that drinking will not and cannot be completely banned from Penn State, and both the administration and the students are uncompromising in disallowing people of legal age to drink. The report included a lot of research and interviews. The journalists first sat on a porch and watched the results of drinking first hand. Then they interviewed students, residents, and business owners. The journalists even interviewed cops and had the cops take them around town. The journalists were also well researched, pulling out information like Penn State is the number one party school but also the safest metro area, and that 1700 students die of alcohol related injuries each year. The journalists employed many powerful narrative techniques. For one, they stayed on topic. I could not find a single instance of when they would deviate from their topic or play a clip that was unrelated to the story they were telling. Their research was very well researched, and they clearly defined any terms they believed not everybody would know, such as the nickname for Natural Light Beer. Their design did need work though; at one point they played a clip that was clearly meant to be seen and not heard. Lastly, the transitions were clear and easy to follow. I never felt lost. Splitting the audio into several chapters also helped me stay on track.
I liked #1 Party School. It was informative and a good listen. What I liked most was how balanced the report was. It did not treat drinking as taboo, nor did it favor it. For the writing assignment that was due Wednesday about Penn State’s Liquid Cocaine, I was able to find a small bias. In this report, I listened carefully and I could not. The narrators were neutral and relied on their sources to tell the story rather than themselves. I don’t know what I would have liked to have heard more or less of; the story was balanced and informative. It felt complete. It was very good and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Now that we finished Bird by Bird, I can look at the book as a whole and point out my favorite point made in the book. I must say the most important point that Lamott made in Bird by Bird is the idea of writing as a form of giving back to the community. Until this book, I always saw writing as a form of expression and a job. My idea of a writer was a person with their computer trying to make a living by writing and trying to get published. Bird by Bird turned this idea upside-down. I never imagined that writing can be used to give back to the community. This point moved me the most because it opened my eyes and gave me a new perspective on writing. I never saw writing as a selfless act until now. Lamott effectively drives this point home in “Giving” by relating it to a child who thinks he would have to die to save his sister. The child was asked to give a blood transfusion to his sister, who has leukemia. While the blood is being taken, he asked how soon will he die. He believed that they were taking enough blood to kill him. This moment struck home with me. This is a heartfelt moment and a triumph in writing from Lamott. Her use of dialogue and pathos was perfect. Lamott clearly put a lot of time into this moment because I believe it was written perfectly. There was a lot of tension throughout the story, the characters were pure, innocent, and believable. Lamott states that children truly show her the magic of giving. She explains how children are innocent and pure. She makes a direct parallel between the boy who thought he would have to give his life to save his sister and writing. She believes that the characteristics this boy held when sacrificing his life are the characteristics that writers should have. Lamott believes that writers have a talent that should be used for the better of society. This reminded me of the moment in Spiderman when Uncle Ben says “With great power comes great responsibility. Earlier in the book, Lamott also touches on the point of using writing for others. Lamott had a friend with a sick baby called Brice. Brice died very early. Lamott visited him very often. When given the opportunity to write an essay about anything, Lamott choses to write about Brice and his parents. Brice’s parents highly appreciated this act, and Lamott also got satisfaction from it. This is another heartfelt moment in the book where Lamott uses her skills for others. She did not write the essay for money. She wrote it for Brice’s parents who greatly appreciated her kindness. Bird by Bird always wrote about writing as a selfless act that should not be done for money, but it didn’t come out until Part 4. The idea of writing as a form of service is my favorite part of Bird by Bird. It changed my mind about writing and writers.
My Addicted Son by David Sheff is a story about a boy whose life has been ruined by drugs. The story starts off in a happy family home in 2002. Everything seemed normal until the narrator makes a note that Nick, the son of the author, “was a playful and affectionate big brother to Jasper and Daisy – when he wasn’t robbing them.” It was then that the mood of the story changed. The scene switches to a melancholy mood and the narrator reveals that Nick was supposedly off methamphetamines for 150 days. This didn’t turn out to be the case. His drug habit overwhelmed him and he kept it a secret from his family, even when confronted about it. Nick’s father showed no preference for a lighter drug like methamphetamine than harder drugs like heroin or cocaine. The story continues along this path. Nick’s father trusts him several times, only for Nick to betray his father’s trust. It was not until the end of the story when Nick relapsed and regretted it. He then doubled his efforts to quit, started writing, biked and swam, and became committed to his sobriety.
There was one main conflict and many smaller ones. The main conflict was between Nick and his father. Nick’s father tried to keep him clean and give him a good life whereas Nick kept relapsing and taking more and harder drugs. This conflict eventually got resolved when Nick kicked the habit at the end. There were several smaller conflicts. For one, Nick was in a conflict with himself and his addiction to drugs. His perseverance to drop drugs showed up whenever he attempts rehab or when he tried to go back to college. The allure of drugs was too strong. He eventually won in the conflict against his drug-addicted self in the end. Another conflict was between Nick’s father and his mother. Nick’s father and mother divorced at an while he was still young. This resulted in the coownership of Nick. This conflict was never resolved but it creates a new conflict: Nick’s father is in a conflict with himself. His father blames Nick’s drug addiction on the divorce. He believes that Nick’s drug problem is based on the fact that Nick’s parents were separated, in coownership of him, and distant. The audience is unaware whether or not this conflict is resolved, but more than likely it is when Nick kicks the habit. Lastly, there is a conflict between Nick and his sibling, Jasper. Nick stole eight dollars from Jasper. For a youth, this is a significant amount of money. Jasper, being too young to understand Nick’s drug addiction, was hurt and confused by Nick’s acts. This conflict was most likely solved by Nick’s letter to Jasper with eight dollars and a promise to always be there.
The point of the story was to show how easily an innocent person can get addicted to hard drugs and how, more times than not, drug addicts are victims of the drugs more than themselves. Nick was never a bad guy. He was an interesting youth. He was counter-culture. He had friends and family who loved him. He was simply a curious youth who wanted to try some drugs. This innocent act became Nick’s downfall when he became addicted to them, and took harder drugs like meth, heroin, and cocaine. Nick always cared about his father and family. At one point, he couldn’t even look his father in the eye because he had fallen so low. Nick is not a bad person but he was a victim of drugs, which was one of the points that the narrator was trying to make. This story is relevant to my age group because we are students in college. Many people are experimenting with drugs. These drugs are most likely limited to alcohol, marijuana and nicotine, but the story shows how a seemingly innocent curiosity can be transformed into a debilitating addiction. Due to this, the intended audience of the story is the curious youths who are considering experimenting with drugs, and parents whose children are susceptible to the influence drugs. The author chose to sequence his writing chronologically with occasional flashbacks. He does not sequence it chronologically including the flashbacks because the flashbacks are only relevant at certain points. I plan to use this technique in my writing. The author also chooses to only include pertinent detail that will either move the story along or create rapport with the main character. This came off as effective and I will also utilize it in my writing. Lastly the author chose to use dialogue occasionally. His dialogue was neither excessive nor rare. I will also use this technique in my writing. The author transitions by using dates and times. For example, he would either write the date, or the time of day, such as morning or night.
http://www.nytimes.com/2005/02/06/magazine/06ADDICT.html
Eating lunch at a public high school isn’t much different than eating lunch anywhere on this planet. You sit down, you eat your lunch, maybe have a chat, and then you go back to what you were doing. The only difference is everything. From the moment that you open those blue double doors on the first day of school, the uncertainty that comes with what you see is only matched by the volatility of the stock market during times of global worry. There are about five hundred kids scrambling in a room that was not designed with the concept that all those kids would be around walking around – at the same time. After failing to find a friendly face in the crowd, you notice the uncomfortable heat that has been following you since you opened those blue double doors. You step in and follow the crowd. People have filed in behind you closing off the entrance. You are now stuck in the crowd. Escape is impossible. All hope is lost. The yellow stain of the room downs your spirits and slows your movements. The distant flicker of a broken light disorients you. You are lost. All movement has stopped. Even in the heat, a cold sweat runs down your spine. You blame it on the heat but you know it’s from your nervousness. You can’t see past the heads of the people around you. Motion reinitiates. You hear a “hey.” You turn. It’s not for you. You hear another “hey.” You turn. That one wasn’t for you either. You hear a third “hey.” You’ve already mastered this. You don’t turn, but that one was your only friend in the cafeteria and he thinks you’re ignoring him so he doesn’t try again. Crap. Your inferiority complex tells you that you won’t eat lunch today; it’s “too much trouble.” Your stomach tells you that you won’t survive another class without a little nutrition.
After you orient yourself, you notice that you’re closing in on the even warmer room where you buy lunch. You have five dollars in your pocket. That’s enough. You hope. You’ve never actually seen the menu. When you get all your food you could find out that it costs a little too much. That would be embarrassing. Why go through that? You could just sit down and skip the meal. The food could also make you sick. You’ve heard about how bad cafeteria food is from television shows and your parents. You could ask your parents to make you a lunch and bring that to school. You look around. The upperclassmen who know each other have already bought their lunch and sat down. Not a brown paper bag in sight. It must be uncool. Being uncool is not even an option. You peak in the cafeteria to see the food. You didn’t expect a line to form in behind you. Even if you asked kindly, there’s no way that many people can move back. It’s like being stuck at an intersection during traffic and a red light strikes. You can’t simply put your car into reverse and move back. You’re stuck. That’s it. High school lunches suck.
I was boarding the plane from Russia. When I sat in my seat going to the states for the first time, I thought about how I could possibly pass an English class full of native speakers. The air conditioning was on full blast, and even the freezing temperatures of Siberia could not compete with the cold sweat that rolled down my back as I sat down in my window seat. I picked up the western magazine in the pocket in front of me, bent it vertically, and used my thumb to surf the pages. It was pure gibberish. I thought, “this is going to be the end of me. How could I compete?”
The truth is I could probably compete just fine. I was really born in New York and lived in the states my entire life. I’ve never been to Russia, and my Russian is about as weak as Spanish. I guess one of my strengths is adjusting the truth in order to fit the prompt. That’s right; I guess. It’s either that or I have pseudologia fantastica, also known as pathological lying. From grade school, we were taught that every question must have an answer, even if it doesn’t. I felt like I was being asked to force myself to be who I’m not in order to satisfy the quota, and I became good at it. If it were up to me, all my writing would be genuine and wholly true, but that would never satisfy my teachers. I encountered prompts that presented a false dilemma: a bifurcation fallacy. My teachers could have asked me if I had stopped killing people and forced me to answer either yes or no; they could have said “write a two-page double-spaced response with twelve point font as to why,” and I would have done it. I would probably have scored anywhere between a B and an A+ and been given a five word blanket statement as to why. I may have two strengths in my writing in the same way that I may have twenty-five if I were asked to write about them. Although, the teachers are usually slyer than that. Maybe my second strength is pretending like I know what I’m doing enough to have fooled my grade school teachers: or maybe I’m just fooling myself.
My writing is not perfect, but I’ve never talked to a teacher about it at length to know my weaknesses. In fact, my writing is probably weaker than most. I’ve been told that I have weak structure. I’ve been told that I used too many secondary sources when the work was derived from purely primary sources. I still haven’t figured that one out, but I’ve been taught to never argue with teachers. I believe my weaknesses lie in how concise my writing is. I am inspired by The Stranger by Albert Camus. In around 123 pages, Camus explores one of the most beautiful and natural philosophies about life; existentialism. Aside from what the book means to me, the way it was written is brilliant. It was so pure: so powerful: so concise. The Stranger is also a stark contrast to what I believe to be another weakness of mine: introductions. The Stranger has one of the best introductions of all times. Every time I read it goose bumps run down my arms. “Maman died today. Or yesterday maybe, I don’t know.” My introductions are formulaic. You start with a fact or quote. You fill up the space in-between with… something. Finally, the infamous thesis statement goes at the end. Maybe that’s just how it’s done and only the great writers of our era can break the mold, or maybe it was taught that way to teach some kind of secret axiom that you can only understand once you’ve reached a sort of prose enlightenment. Although, I’ll admit, it’s most likely because that mold is best for the genre, audience, and purpose.
As a writer, I would like to learn the boundaries of writing. I want to learn how absurd I could be in every genre of writing. I could never truly be satisfied with the norm. This goal is very hard to achieve because nobody has a guideline for absurdity; how could they? It’s absurd. I will have to write a lot and receive plenty of feedback to achieve this goal. I believe that genuine effective absurdity and ineffective avant-garde are two sides of the same coin. Making that discrete distinction is something I will be required to make in order to achieve my goal. One song that truly expresses my interest in the absurd media is Frontier Psychiatrist by The Avalanches. This song may not be the weirdest song ever made, but it is catchy, effective, and interesting. In short, on a playlist of a thousand random songs, it will stand out effectively. That is how I would like my writing to be. This particular course will help me with the nuances of writing. It will give me the tools I need to write in college and in life. I truly believe that this course can also give me the tools I need to achieve my goal.
